▶ Your Answer : Some people think that social life is important to make our life happy. However, in my opinion, jobs have more impacts on people's lives in that money provides us with a lot of chances to improve our living standards and to enable us to enjoy social life better. At first, jobs give us money which maintains our life quality. In capitalism, without money, we would have to face many difficulties, while if we earn a lot of money, there are many options we can choose for our happiness. For example, after my father retired from his place, he started traveling to many countries with my mother. So, they could enjoy their lives with money they made before. Also, my parents' happy life gave children, including me, good impressions and educational lessons because we felt happy due to with (전치사) their happy life. In this sense, the quality of life depends on how much money they have because the monetary condition is not ignored easily in this society. On top of that, social life would be impossible if there is not (부정문 긍정문) enough money to spend on social activities. In other words, people need some money to part in a social activity like exercise, book club, climbing. To be frank, when we go out to do something, we have to spend money. So if we do not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요.) have money, it would be impossible to go somewhere and we have to stay at home and watch TV. In this capitalism system, spending money has a significant role to expand our relationship. For example, after graduation, I was employed in a company that gave me a lot of salaries. Meanwhile, I spend most of the money I earned on activities with my friends rather than save them. As a result, I could make new friends from various backgrounds, which made my life more abundant and fruitful. To sum up, I agree that social life cannot be ignored. However, it is more important that we have a well-paid job that gives us a better monetary foundation in advance. It is because a decent and well-paid job gives us more opportunities to make our life happy. |