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majority of people in their early to mid-twenties think that it is not right to
have hasty decisions. This notion, however, does not reflect the stance that I
hold and should be thought in a different light. I believe that hasty decisions
are really right and needed especially in the work, because they help
people have enough time to deal with other tasks and build crisis management
skills. First, hasty decisions are right especially
in the work as they give people to have enough time to deal with other tasks.
Interestingly, it has been a topic on various social network sites such as
Twitter where people hold different opinions. Initially, I thought that hasty
decisions are never right particularly in the work. However, after reading
relevant tweet feeds, I realized that people would not have enough time for
other tasks they must do if they did not haste their decisions. As many people
know, there a lot of tasks people must complete in any kind of works. Also,
their tasks change every day. People handle all these kind of tasks for alone
or for teams. As a result, they are inevitably short of time. There is no time
to think and study deeply for one task. If they do not hurry about their
decisions for each task, they will not complete all their tasks for a day. Second, hasty decisions are right especially in the
work, because they help people build crisis management skills. Interestingly, a renowned social
scientist in Korea published an article in The Korean Herald last Tuesday which
claims that hasty decisions are 0effective in order to build crisis
management skills. His study was particularly interesting because it supported
my view. The article claimed that 62 percent of 200 Korean office workers chose
hasty decisions as the most effective reason for building crisis management
skills. This is because people must have decisions quickly but also correctly
and which are efficient for their tasks. Time saving is not a concern.
Reasonable decisions in a short time is really important. And it is really
necessary in the hard situations and business crisis. People should overcome
these as soon as possible. According to
haste their decisions but correct ones, 어색합니다. they can build the skills to manage with the crisis. I thought of this
report because the results of the survey resonated my thoughts. To
sum up, I believe that it is right and also necessary to have hasty decisions
especially in the work: having enough time to deal with other tasks and
building crisis management skills. Consequently, the importance of view cannot
be underestimated in that it can kill two birds with one stone for the reasons
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