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What are the quality of a good neighbor are is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debates. Many opinions exist in regard to this topic. After reviewing the opinions from several perspectives, personally I agree with the idea that helping and forgiving people are the quality of good neighbors for the following three reasons.
To begin with, the neighbors who help with each other are good neighbors. 왜 서로 돕는 것이 좋은 이웃의 요건이라고 보는지에 대한 설명이 필요합니다. According to the research conducted by some experts of Seoul National University in Korea, the familiarity between neighbors who have helped one another is much higher than the opposite case, which means that taking a supporting and helping attitude is significantly important for relationship between neighbors. In the case of Pyeongtaek, pyeoung teak, the city in which I have lived for twenty three years, . With the great result of the research, a festival making neighbors familiar has been regularly held. And positive consequences and cases continue to arise up to now.
Additionally, the people understanding some noise generated by neighbors are brilliant neighbors. 마찬가지로 소음공해를 이해해주는 것이 '왜' 중요한 자질인지에 대한 설명이 필요합니다. 사실상 '서로 돕는다'라는 body1의 주장에 비해 '소음공해'는 너무 구체적으로 들어갔다는 느낌이 듭니다. 서로를 이해해주는 것을 개괄적인 주장으로 제시하고 소음공해를 그에 대한 하나의 예시로 사용하는 것도 괜찮을 것 같아요. From the article, in Dong-A newspaper, written in last Thursday, some neighbors in England have frequently fought due to noise pollution and finally one person died. is died. Such accidents take place in our daily life. For me, I have experienced something similar to the article mentioned above. Whenever my little sister makes some noise when playing alone, the neighbors living in the home next to my house come and shout loudly requiring us to be quite, causing a frequent conflict with each other.
Lastly, some thoughtful sentence can also provide us with proper way to think about the topic. There is a famous Korean proverb helpful for learning realistic wisdom 'Nobody can live without neighbors', which means that neighbors play a crucial role in our daily life. I strongly believe that the proverb can be appropriately applied to the topic of today. This is because the famous proverb is the sentence which points precisely out moral lesson associated with the main topic about which the issue is talking. off-topic. 좋은 이웃의 자질에 대한 문제이므로 '이웃의 좋은 점'에 대한 설명은 불필요합니다.
In a conclusion, I agree with the idea that neighbors should help and understand with each other for the reasons mentioned above. In this regard, I clearly recommend all neighbors to have a moderate mind.
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논제가 묻는 내용은 '좋은 이웃의 자질이 무엇이라고 생각하는가'이므로 제시한 자질을 선택한 이유에 대한 논리적 설명이 함께 서술되어야 합니다. '이웃'의 순기능을 생각해보고 서로 도움으로써, 혹은 서로를 잘 이해함으로써 좋은 이웃으로 지낼 수 있는 '이유'를 더 구체적으로 제시하면 좋은 답안이 될 수 있을 거예요. 논점에 맞지 않는 문단은 오히려 감점요인이 될 수 있으니 유의해주세요. 수고 많으셨습니다. ^^ |