■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :해커스 정규 진단고사 "Dogs domesticated..." |
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▶ Your Answer :
The reading passage contends that the begining of
domesticated dogs can be fully explained by three theories. On the other hand,
the lecturer brings up several points that contradicts this argument.
First, the lecturer argues that the wolf theory is not
proper opinion. This is because that hunting styles varyed between wolves and
dogs. Moreover, training wild wolf was difficult. It was very dangerous for
human to manage to wolves. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that
ancient human trained orphaned wolf pups that were loyalty and friendliness toward
human.
Second, according to the lecture, many scientists
found new evidence that shows ancestor of modern dogs were more earlier. By
comparing its footprint, they could found that evidence. This refutes the
reading passage’s assertion that approximately 16,000 years ago, dogs were
domesticated by human.
The final point made by the lecture is that origins of
domesticated dogs are many sites. Dogs existed not only a region of China, but
also all around the world. DNA study indicates that there are diversity
origins. This counters the reading passage’s argument that dogs were initially domesticated
in China. |
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The reading passage contends that the beginning
of domesticated dogs can be fully explained by three theories. On the other
hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradicts this
argument.
First, the lecturer argues that the wolf theory (what is the wolf theory?) is not (a)proper
opinion. This is because that hunting styles varied
between wolves and dogs. Moreover, training wild wolf was difficult. It was
very dangerous for humans to manage to wolves. This casts doubt on
the reading passage’s
claim that ancient human trained orphaned wolf pups that were loyalty and
friendliness toward human.
Second, according to the lecture, many scientists found
new evidence that shows ancestor of modern dogs were more earlier. By
comparing its(whose footprints?) footprint, they could found that evidence.
This refutes the reading passage’s assertion that approximately 16,000 years ago, dogs were
domesticated by humans.
The final point made by the lecture is that origins of
domesticated dogs are (made
of) many sites. Dogs existed not only
(came from) a region of China, but also all around the world. DNA
study indicates that there are diversity origins. This counters the reading
passage’s argument that dogs
were initially domesticated in China
Writing 0-30 Score
Scale
Fair (17-23)
Overall Comment: 디테일이 매우 부족합니다. 본론의 첫 번째 문단에서는 Lecturer argues that wolf
theory, wolf theory 이 뭔지 구체적으로 표현하세요. 본론의 2번째 문단에서는 its foot print라고 표현했는데 wolf의 foot print인지
dog의 foot print인지 명확하기 표현하지 않았습니다. 문법 오류도 많습니다. Lecturer의 표현들을 그대로 사용하세요.