Even though students learn science during school day whether they are interested in the subject or not, when they enter the university, only some of them major in science. some of them are majors in science while the others are not. The latter Students who reluctantly learned science might think that science it is not necessary for them, and apprehending it makes them is a waste of time and money. However, I consider science beneficial and significant in the human's life time because we benefit (take advantage 하면 약간 부정적 의미로 들리니까 benefit이 더 잘어울릴듯해요:) take advantage from science.
To begin, with an only a small amount of element knowledge about science, it enables people to can pass their time more conveniently and safely. In other words, they are able to solve problems if they are aware of how things work. it. Otherwise, they people would waste money and time without awareness of science. Moreover, basic information about it helps prevents people from in serious accidents or emergency. For example, when you recognize that a fire break out because of a falling oil stove, you would use water to put off it off. However, this solution makes a bigger problem, making a bigger fire. On the contrary, if you learned the principle of an oil and fire in science class, you will take a blanket in your room in order to block the air from the fire. And then,By doing so, you can easily extinguish the fire. Therefore, scientific knowledge beside this example, it offers you various solution and help in daily life.
Next, as you begin taking a science class although you are not science major, you would also begin taking a class for your success. This is because it allows you to find how to overcome hardships and endure difficulties necessary for success. Needless to say, if you are not a major in science, you would consider science obstacles. But, if you have challenges it and end up achieving the field, you can get what you don't expect such as positive mind, courage, persistence and wise. For example, looking back, I was poor at science in high school. Unfortunately, it was necessary science was a mandatory course to take in order to enter the university I wanted to. So, despite lots of difficulties, I strived for science to meet the requirement of the university. At the end, not only did I get perfect transcript, but also did I get the great things like confidence and endurance.
To sum up, it is important to challenge pay attention to/ learn science although you are not a science major. You can conquer your hardships and it keeps youself from a huge accident. Also, over with scientific knowledge, you are able to get endurance, positive mind or confidence needed to success in your life.
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목표는 20점만 넘기자 하구 공부하고 있어여,,,
처음 토플 공부하고 있는데 챙피를 무릅쓰고 시험이 코앞이라 용기내어 올려봄니닷!
문법에 맞게 쓰고 싶은데, 어색한 표현이 많을 것 같아요,
첨삭과 날카로운 조언 달게 받겠습니다...T.T
음, 이 정도만 써도 20점 문제..없을까...여..?
제가 고쳐야할 점과, 도움이 될 것들을 적어주시면
정말 하늘이 도우실거예요..
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