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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.' Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position | |
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Steve jobs is are envied by many people and some say that he is a real lucky guy. However if people knew his steve's endeavor, they would not have said not say like that. A The common ground of successful people is the 'endeavor', not a 'luck'. This is due to the fact that hard work creates opportunities and pure luck doesn't come frequently.
As the old saying goes, heaven helps those who help themselves. That is, luck is not free. It comes to people who make effort since only those people could use the opportunities. In contrast, people who just want the luck cannot even notice whether is chance or not. Although they notice the opportunity, they have no ability to make good use of the chance. For example, famous foot-ball players are always practice hard and try to stay in health. Those efforts result in prodigious improvement and when they get a chance in a match, they success in goal.
Also, the pure luck has few possibility. chances of being lucky everytime are very slim. 항상 운이 좋을 수 있는 것은 아니다. In other words, luck hardly comes around, and even if it does, it is unreliable. it hardly shows up and catching it is very difficult. Hence, it is wiser to directly find out a way to succeed(동사) success than to wait for a luck. To give you an idea, here is a good instance. According to a study, people use up their money for lottery tickets.- 더 구체적으로 써주세요 ~ more than 50percent of employees buy at least one lottery a week. 이런 식으로요 ^^ If they have deposited the money, they could have saved as much amount of money as much as the prize. It is more practical to save money than to waste it on lottery. How ridiculous they are they. Finally they just wasted money and earned nothing. This shows that just looking forward pure luck never brings up a success.
Therefore I believe that endeavor is a key to success. When it comes to a luck, it should be regarded as a prize that is granted to patient people. Making an effort, people could make a luck and catch it. | |
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