07-21-07
These days, many people want to earn money as much as they can. However, there are different views about what they should do with it after they earn money. Although there could be other perspectives, I think it is better to save my money rather than enjoy my money as soon as I earn. In the following passages, I would like to elaborate the point I mentioned above.
Almost all of people do not know what would happen to them in their future. In other words, people can not predict their future. If they could, how come there are many people dying because they do not know they have serious diseases and they find out too late or they get in car accidents? Therefore, people need to save some money for their future. For example, I have an uncle who retired few years ago. He recently found out that he has had cancer, a disease which costs lots of money to cure. However, he could afford to get treatment to cure cancer because he has been saving some of money he has earned since he was retiring and he can no longer work. It was wise of him to save some money for his future.
In addition, people can not work for their entire life. What I mean by this is that people usually do not have the same amount of power from their youth to golden age. Consequently, people have to retire from their job at some point of their life. However, people need money to live their lives although they retire. If people did not save any money for their future, there is no possible way for them to live unless their grown-up children give some money to them. It is nice of their children to give some of their money to their parents but parents should not depend on their children's money that much because their children have their own life. Therefore, I strongly believe that people should save some money for their future.
In conclusion, I think people should save some money for their future rather than just enjoy their money. Some people might say nothing is going to happen in their future so they will spend their money and not think about their future. However, nobody can say anything sure about their future unless he or she is God. Therefore, people need to save some money because they can not predict their future and they need some money for their old age after they retire. If nothing happens to you in your future, you can spend all of the money you have saved without any concern. I think it is better for people to prepare themselves all the time but it is your choice to decide whether you should save your money or not.
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