In our competitive society, to make children a better
person in the future, parents are putting efforts in many ways. Some parents
try the ways to set strict rules for children. However, in my opinion, if
parents want to see their children succeed in life, they should set their
children free for the following reasons.
First reason why I think parents should set children
free is owing to the fact that it can form better studying ways for children. Parents who enforce rigid rules can
make children to study in rigid cases, which
might not fit for their children. In
contrast, if children get a chance to find out
the way that fits to them, they can make better results. Also students
in the period of adolescence might against to
their parents if they feel like they are under the control of parents who do
not believe their ability and possibility. So making rigorous rules might cause
the opposite effect from what parents have
purposed.
Another crucial reason is owing to the fact that
setting children free might make them feel that
everything is fun. For From my experience perspective,
if a person let made me study history by
myself every 1 hour a day, and get a high
score for the history test, I would be bored to
death by thinking because I would consider it
as one of my work to do. But if the person just gives me the videos of history
lecture and let me look through it, I would be curious about what the video is
containing and I would slowly look through it. After I finish looking through in it, I might have more curious things about it and I might find and note about
history by myself and find the fun part of the history. Also, if there were
incentives rather than rigid rules, I might feel more fun to history would enjoy it more. This means not to set rigid rules can make children to be more interested and
concentrated on many things. (If, might와 같이 확신이 차지 않는 표현들은 피하는 게 좋습니다. Would, definitely, 와 같은 표현들을 활용하세요.)
To
sum up, children who have parents that set them free would
know themselves and have fun to while doing
their works. In this regard, I think it is best for parents not to set strict
rules for their children.