▶ Your Answer :
Plants play very significant role in the
world. These give a lot of things to people such as food, shelter, clothing and
so on. Also, there are a lot of kind of plants which are very helpful for
people. In my opinion, the most important plants to human’s life is rice. There
is a reason why l think like that and I will explain the reason in my essay.
Undoubtedly, most of people, especially
Asians, consume rice as their staple food. As a Korean, I eat rice every meal. Of
course, if there are no rice in my country, most people have a huge trouble
with their diet. Rice has some advantages; farmers cultivate easily, not too
much expensive, can eat diverse way, and have a significant nutrient;
carbohydrate. For these advantages, most Koreans love and depend on rice since
ancient age. There is one research conducted by Seoul National University in
2015 which demonstrate how important rice is in people’s lives in Korea.
According to this research, 42 percentage of farmers depend on cultivating rice
for their income. Also, as many as 96 percentage of people responded that rice
is the most significant grocery in their food life. Finally, the Korea economy
are drastically influenced by rice production rate. As you see, rice plays an
important role in many ways; as a main income, as a main dietary food, and as a
power of nation financial.
To sum up, for the reason
mentioned above, I strongly believe that rice is the most important plants for
me and my country among a number numbers of plants.
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