▶ Your Answer : The reading talks about the origin of the vitrified stones in Scotland. It offers three theories that speculate the reason why the vitrified stones were generated. However, the professor in the lecture gives some reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s points.
First, the professor states signal fire is not a cause of vitrified stones. This is because there are only one or two spots of signal fires that could be found on the walls. If the signal fire is the real reason for vitrified stones, it would affect just a portion of walls. In contrast, all the surface of the walls was changed. Next, he argues the statement that the lightning strike is the reason for verified stones does not make sense. This is because it is not possible that many lightning strikes occurred to vitrify extensive walls. He goes further and says that the crack rocks are not caused by lightning strike but by rocks worn and torn apart. just by normal wear and tear. Finally, the professor insists that there was no volcanic eruptions near the area. Therefore, people have to move the numerous stones from an area far away in which volcanic eruption have occurred. However, people did not have developed tools to move the heavy stones in this period. Thus, it is false that ancient people built the walls by using volcanic rocks vitrified prior to construction. - 쉼표 사용 주의해주세요. - And, But, So는 가급적 문장 앞에 사용 지양해주세요.
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