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Some people say that moving to another city
or country is not great idea because of old friends. However, in my opinion, I
think it would be a good opportunity and an anxiety about losing old friends is
meaningless. This is because if your old friends are real friends, so they do not
go away from you and you can keep in touch with them. Also you can broaden your
social network by meeting new people in different places.
First, the bond of the best friends will
not break because of your moving. Suppose that your friends leave from you
after moving. Would it be possible to call them old friends? The answer will be
no. Your old friends will never leave you and you can keep in touch with them
after moving. Also you and your friends are able to get together regularly. For
example, I was born in Jjeonju and I lived until when I was 19 years old.
However, I had to move to Seoul because of my university and my father’s work.
Although I live in different place with my old hometown friends, we always keep
in touch with messenger and phone calls. Besides, we get together every two
months and also we always go to the beach in summer vacation and ski resorts in
winter. Thus I have never felt alone due to my old friends. I am happy with
them.
Second, you have a chance to meet new
people and make new friends in a different city. It will be a good opportunity to
broaden your human relationship. In this society, having a wide human network
is really important because we are not living alone. Also you may make new
friends as good as your old friends. For example, as I said in the first example I
moved to another city from my hometown. At first, I had felt alone and I
thought that I wanted to go back to my hometown. However, overtime, after
entering university, I could meet new people in school and make friends in my
region through them. Three of them have become familiar with me as much as my
old friends. As a result, I did not feel alone anymore and I could broaden my
human network by meeting new people.
To sum up, there is a no problem to contact
with your old friends after leaving a city that your old friends live in. Moreover,
you can have a chance to meet new people and make new friends. In this regard,
I think it is a good opportunity for you to move to a new city or country.
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