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As society has changed, many people have lot of stress from high competitive life. Therefore, many people rarely feel comfortable than the past, and we can expect other people to be well-manner. Some people say that people do not need to be polite to other people because we live in fast and highly competitive society, so we get a lot of stress. However, I think that people should be polite to others. In this essay, I will present briefly two reasons to support my opinion.
#서론에서 고도경쟁사회로 변화함으로써 사람들은 스트레스를 받는다라는 문장은 다른사람에게 친절해야한다라는 주장과는 연관성이 없어보입니다. 즉, 서론에 불필요한 문장으로 인식되는 것이지요. 어떤점에서 고도경쟁사회와 친절함이 연관되어지는 것인지를 서술하신다면 더욱 좋은 글이 될 것 같습니다.
Firstly, although we live in fast and crowded world, we should follow show social manners to others. This is because, it is a basic and significant task to us. Furthermore, it can maintain social order and make making our world better. If many people do not follow social manner and treat other people incorrectly, our society might be confusing. Then, social problems such as social crimes will also increase. According to a survey, conducted by a social research team of Tokyo University, more than eighty five percent of university students answered that people should perform their basic task which is significant in order to maintain their social order by being polite. It shows that people should be polite to others in order to observe the proprieties??왜 이게 polite해야되는 목적이 되는것이죠? and maintain our society’s order. Therefore, to be polite to others is important in our society.
In addition, today’s society regards trust among people is the most important thing in our world. This is because, relationship connection between we and other people can make our society better, and we can truly become a truly person/component in our society. When many people do not be show courteous to others, trust among people is can be disappeared. As a result, it gives negative effects to both us and others. Therefore, people should be show courteous as a responsibility of being a member of society at their workplace, school and home. My parents always talk that trust and bond between I me and others are the best thing during in my life. Hence, I have this point always in my mind, and I try hard to be well-mannered to others. Therefore, I think that people need to expect others to be polite for their bond among people with others.
As a result, some people say that nowadays’ people cannot be polite because they live in a fast, crowded world. However, to be being a polite person to other people is important and basic task in our society and it makes relationship connection and trust more trustful among people better. By this, we can maintain society order and become a better person in our good society. Therefore, I strongly believe that although we are living in a fast, competitive world, people should treat others courteously and expect others to be polite.
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