▶ Your Answer : One of my teachers in my high
school assigned a daily set of math questions to me and my colleagues
every day. Equipped with the vision of enlightening the students by
the knowledge of calculus, she ordered us to solve the problem sets and submit
them before every classes, which opened from monday to friday. which
was held everyday. However, I believe that
bestowing homeworks to students day-to-day is detrimental for both
students and educators, and education itself.
First of all, everyday
assignments will make students tiring. tired The young
guys students do not take only one class a
day. Usually in the education system of modern countries, they are obliged to
take part in several classes. Therefore, issuing homeworks everyday will
increase the workloads of them, making them let
them feel physically and mentally fatigue. If it is
repeated on and on, students will not be able to follow up with the class
as they are too exhausted to understand what lectures teachers
and textbooks argue. tell
Moreover, gurus will not be
able to teach another part of the education, teaching attitude and norms, as
they will lose reputations from students. It is natural that students
will not like for students to not like those
who give assignments everyday. In other words, teachers will lose reputation
and trust from them. This is problematic for them as teachers in most schools
do not only teach scholastic subjects but they do let the students know learn the
behaviors, attitudes, and norms of the society that the youngsters will live.
To educate these moral stuff, the relationship between two groups is
significant as the younger ones will just believe what the seniors say.
However, with low reputation from students triggered from
issuing daily homeworks, teachers will have a hard time teaching
those internal things.
Lastly, everyday assignments
are not good for academic education itself. Education researchers in Korea
stresses the importance of self-doing study, which means that studying should
be done by oneself. In other words, he or she should not depend on the lectures
and the assignments that other people including teachers merely give. Rather
than feeded being fed by
mother birds, the researchers strongly argue that the baby birds, students,
should fly by themselves, zealously looking for references in library or
searching on the Internet for additional resources related to the topic he or
she wants to learn. However, a bunch of daily assignments will hinder
students to execute 'self-doing study,' the best way for students to
learn something, according to the researchers. Therefore, in terms of the
efficiency of education, daily homeworks will damage the efficiency of
education.
In conclusion, giving
assignments everyday to students is not helpful for them as it is not
beneficial for students' everyday life and teachers' reputation. Not only
that, it also does not give them time for self-doing study, the most effective
way for education. I hope that teachers like that of my high
school would understand the detrimental outcome of day-to-day burdens.
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