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Korea is small country, but has a lot of beautiful places who a foreign visitor spend time to enjoy. I have same problem like recommending the best place to my foreing friends. In many excellent places, I recommend Cheju island
First of all, I recommend my foreign friend Cheju island because Cheju has wonderful nature such as mountains, beaches, falls, parks and forests. I have been Cheju island for a year and felt that Cheju is beautiful place. Cheju island is locate in southern Korea sea, so cheju island has mild and warm l weather like Hwaii island. Cheju has Mt Halla which is the highest in Korea and Mt.Sungsan who has beautiful sunrising. When I was in Cheju, I used to ciimb Mt Hanlla and Mt Sunsang to enjoy Sunrising. Chejeyun fall is also beatiful place. It is not large fall, but has mysteriuos legend that nymphs used Chejeyun fall to bath. Cheju has curios flowers which people did not have seen. Because Cheju has beatiful nature, a foreign will enjoy in Cheju island.
Second, Cheju has many actities and event for visitor to engage in on Cheju island. Papdong park has a lot of actities such as concert, basketball, and soccer with seaside. In spring, I enjoyed concert and dance party in Tapdong park. One of the specail actiivities is scuba diving. Cheju has well preserved sea enviroment, so a visitor will enjoy outstanding visibilty like tropical fish. Likewise, he can go riding horse, fishing, golfing. Cheju has a lot of activities, so I want to recommend a foregin visitor Cheju island.
Based on the above statement mentioned, it can be concluded that I would recomment a foreign visitor to spend in Cheju island. Cheju has many beautiful and conserved nature such as beach, mountain, fall and park. There is many activities and events in Cheju island. If he or she visit in Cheju, they will have a good time which they never forgets
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