▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is
ample support for author's claim that globalization of world economy has
numerous benefits. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons
as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First, the professor contends that
a lot of local factories have to be closed as people get more jobs from foreign
companies. He mentions an event happened in US as an example. This casts doubt
on the reading passage's claim that economical globalization results in
improvement of local economy.
Next, the professor insists that
bringing new technologies from abroad is harmful for domestic companies in long
term. It is because the way of adapting new technologies are often made in not
improper ways. This counters the reading passage's assertion that development of
technologies is one of the benefits of globalizing the world economy.
Finally, the professor argues that
customers are not able to get cheaper products from foreign countries after
all. In many cases, the government demands expensive import taxes to products
which come from other countries. This refutes the reading passage's suggestion
that globalized world economy can make cheaper products available for consumers.
예상점수: 27-30 총평: 글을 전체적으로 짜임새 있게 잘 쓰셨고, 내용도 그에 맞게 훌륭하게 서술하여 주신 것 같습니다. 딱히 문제가 될만한 부분이 없네요. 요약도 잘 되어있고 구성도 잘 잡아주셨습니다. 다만 조금 더 발전하시려면 자잘한 실수를 줄이시고 첫번째 문단의 경우 event가 무엇인지 직접 적어주시는게 더 좋았을 것 같아요. 수고 많으셨습니다. |