▶ Your Answer :
These days, some people take
it for granted that universities should spend more money on salaries for
professors in order to improve the quality of education. However, contrary to
this idea, I strongly believe that universities should not invest more money on
financial supports for university professors. The rationale behind this is that
universities should spend more money on entertainment fields and invest money
on scholarships for university students.
First of all, entertainment elements
on universities plays an important role in relieving stress of students. This is
mainly because, by enjoying interesting activities such as music band
activities, rock climbing, and basketball club, people can easily and quickly
escape from boring and harsh school life. However, when people study every day
without leisure activities, they can be sick and tired of it. This stress them
out. What is worse, stress is one of primary factors of illnesses through
weakening the immune system. Thus, people are more likely to be mentally and
physically weak when studies every day. According to research of Seoul National
University in 2011, two groups of students experienced about rate of getting stress.
Students of group A played a soccer game every weekend and other students of
group B did not enjoy any leisure activities. This experience showed a big difference
on academic achievement and rate of getting stress. Grades of students of group
A did not get any stress and increased about ten percent compared to before
experience while the rate of stress students of group B increased about
twenty-five percent and it causes disturbed academic abilities a lot.
On top of that, universities
should provide more scholarships to students for improving their enhancing
their academic growth. An important reason is that nowadays most students have
loads of work because they are responsible to their living, getting a job, and financial
problems. As a result, they can’t concentrate on their studies and do a part-time
job at the same time. This is because I think universities should provide more
money on scholarships for university students in order to improve the quality
of education. From my experience, when I was a sophomore, I attended a school
and had a part-time job in French restaurant at the same time. At first, I was
good to make money and meet various people who have different cultures, nationality,
and dialects. However, against all expectations, I just tired that I could not
concentrate on my studies. Eventually, I got a low grades that I never gotten
before. After examination result, I quoted a French restaurant, and studied
hard to get a scholarship. Finally, I got higher grades than before and got a
scholarship as the second grade. Were it not for getting scholarships, I would
have more adverse mental effects from financial problems.
In conclusion, without any doubt, I firmly believe that universities should spend more money on
scholarships for students. The reason is that they enable them to maintain
mental health and to improve their academic achievements.
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