Some people think that homework is not needed for students. They may think homework is not the important factor for students. However, in my opinion, students should be given homework everyday. This is because they can improve their performances and they can obtain good habits by doing home assignments.
To begin with, they can develop their academic performances in school by doing homework. Generally, repeating and reviewing the subjects are very helpful ways to improve their academic performances. For example, there was a poll couducted conducted by the Korea Educational Association. The survey’s main purpose was to determine whether homework was helpful to students’ performances. An overwhelming 72% responded that home assignments have a good impact on their academic performances. They said that homework helped them to memorise their subjects by repeating concepts learned. Therefore, they could get better scores when they took tests. This showed that homework helps students to improve their academic performances.
On top of that, students can gain good habits through their homework. By giving tasks, teacher can naturally push students to study hard althought they did do not like studying. Then it permits students to obtain good habits. Let me take my experience as an example. When I was in elementary school, I did not like to study at all and played for fun after school. One day, my homeroom teacher decided to change my laziness and bad study habits. So that he gave me a lot of home assignments and if I did not finish it them on time, he gave me punishments. Because I did not want to be punished get punishments, I had no choice but did to do my homework everyday. Surprisingly, his tasks helped me to get a good study habit and I could became able to sit on at my desk (sit on desk는 말 그대로 책상 위에 앉는 것) for a long time. This story proved that homework can help students to reap learn good study habits.
To sum up, I believe that students should be given homework everyday. This is due to the fact that they can improve their academic performances and get good study habits.
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