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There are some people who believe that
going to museums is a good way to get to know about a country. However, I personally
believe that there are other better ways to understand and learn about the
country for two subsequent reasons. First, visiting the country for real is more effective. Second, using the internet can be more quick and convenient than going to museums.
To begin with, one sightseeing is worth of hundreds of words. To be specific, traveling a country is more effective in terms of understanding culture. Those vivid memories from the traveling last longer.
For example, when I first visited New Zealand, I not only went to museums but
also traveled all around the country. I could have chances to meet native
people, Maori, and could learn their culture by participating in their rituals
in a preserved town. Although the trip was 10 years ago, I still remember their
culture such as how much they consider the nature and why they worshipped their
holy land. However, frankly, I do not remember what I saw and what I
understood in the museums. From this experience, I believe that visiting a
country is much more efficient than going to museums.
On top of that, there is another better way
to learn about a country, the internet. The arrival of the internet changed our
lives in diverse ways. This is because The internet is really fast, accessible,
and convenient in searching for the information. Furthermore, an increased
penetration of smartphone accelerated this trend. Therefore, people can easily
get information about a country. For instance, you can access to Youtube, a video platform, and
watch particular country's national news. More surprising thing is that even
museums have e-museums so that everyone in the world can look around the
contents of those museums whenever they want.
To sum up, visiting a country and using the
internet are better ways to get to know a country. In this regard, I believe
that going to museums is not the best option.
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