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Some people might believe that it is possible to be completely honest with friends. However, I personally disagree with the idea for the two subsequent reasons. First, it is harmful for relationships with friends to be always honest regardless of situations. Second, it is sometimes necessary for people who want to keep their privacy to be dishonest.
To start with, being always honest with friends can be harmful for relationship. To be specific, in some cases, when people tell the truth about negative aspects of people, people can get easily hurt. It keeps people from having a good relationship and results in conflicts with their friends. Let me bring up my story as an example. (Let 형태 구어체 사용 지양해주세요) For instance, last summer, I invited my friend to dinner and cooked a variety of foods such as pizza, pasta, fresh salad and even desert for my friend. However, my friends tasted a little and told me that it is not delicious. He did not eat all food that I prepared for him all day long. I was very upset and ended up not meeting him again in life. If he had not been too honest at that time, I would have got along with him now.
In addition, being dishonest sometimes is necessary for people to keep their own privacy. What this means is that everyone does not want to be loud about certain details of their personality such as sex life, religious life, and overcoming a bad habit. As a result, people are not likely to tell the truth to keep their privacy. According to a recent survey done by Korea university, 80% of average people said that they do not talk about their privacy honestly. This is due to the fact respecting their own private life is important for them to maintain their autonomy and individuality. This clearly shows that people usually do not tell the truth to keep their privacy.
In conclusion, being not honesty always sometimes hinder people from having not only have a good relationship with their friend but also keep their own privacy. For these reasons, I personally believe that being completely honest with friend is not possible.
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