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Once started as a secret military intranet, the Internet has succeeded to become an enormous creature in our daily lives. Undoubtably, the Internet accounts for huge parts of our lifestyles. And now the Internet has become more important than the conventional medium, television, which was once a representative for our new lifestyles too.
First of all, the Internet is unbelievably portable. Televisions are usually regarded as furnitures that can be seen only in our houses. This is because televisions are needed to be connected with plugs, and too heavy to carry. On the other hand, we can use the Internet at any places, and the Internet is available at lots of devices such as mobile phones, notebooks, and even some kinds of watches. Since the Internet is handy, we can freely access to the Internet. In reverse, that also means that the Internet can be influencial to human beings regardless of locations.
Furthermore, it can be said that the Internet is a smart online encyclopedia. Only television broadcasting centres can choose what to present on television channels. In contrary, we can freely select what to search or what to see, listen and enjoy if we decide to use the internet. Moreover, the Internet contains countless information which we need. For example, if we need informations about studying English, we can just pick up our mobile phones or sit in front of computers. And we can search for plenty of informations which can be conducive for studying English. On the other hand, television programmes have limited informations compared to the Internet, and we have to wait for a certain television programme which may present what we want to know.
To sum up, the Internet is very portable so we can use the internet freely regardless of where we are. In addition, the Internet has a score of useful informations, compared to what televisions show us. For these reasons, I firmly believe that the Internet plays crucial role in modern human society than television does.
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