Some people think that it is more advantageous for old people to do something new than it is for young people. However, in my opinion, the younger generation might take risks more easily than the older ones. There are two reasons for this assertion. First, young people can get precious lessons through a variety of experiences in their lives and second, older people do not afford doing new things after retirement.
To begin with, trying new things allow young people to learn valuable lessons. This is because young people are able to know which choice is better for their future by trying having various experiences. On the other hands, old people have already accumulated their ways of life lives, which make it difficult for them to try other things. For example, when my uncle was young, he tried various jobs to know which area was suited for him. Finally he got to know that he wanted to be an English teacher. Even if he had another job and had to a different academic background, he was young and had a lot of passion for fulfilling to pursue his dream. Finally he did it. This implies that young people should do new things to get valuable lessons (lesson은 어디서 나오는 얘기인지? 예시와 무슨 관련인지?).
On top of that, older people do not have enough money to take risks after retirement. If they failed a new thing and even spent spend a lot of money on it, older people would not have stable earnings for living. This means that older generation should stick to doing something which they are used to doing. For instance, my grandfather started a new bakery business after his retirement. This was perfectly different from his former working area. Moreover, he spent so much money to buy new equipment and hire employers. However, he was not accustomed to his new business, thus finally he failed after 3 years later. As a result, he lost all the money which needed to for his retirement life.
To sum up, younger generation should have a wealth of opportunities to try a lot of things and old people had better do thing which they already experienced. In this regard, I strongly believe that young people are better to try new things than old people.
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