Some younger adults prefer to live with their families than to separate
from them as quickly as possible. This is because they can do their jobs with
while maintaining a
stable life in terms of their limited budget.
However, in my opinion, younger adults should have some experience for
themselves. (어떤 experience인지 명시해 주세요. Independent?) From my point of view, it makes them have provides
them with chances to feel the real world actively. Also, it provides
them with an opportunity to feel free from their
parent’s rules.
To begin with, younger people have chances to experience with the actual world. As competition among people become
severe, they get a lot of stress from struggling with their works. As a result,
they tend to more depend depend more on
their families since the members might be the
only people that can give a heartfelt advice for
them. However, to have satisfactory jobs for their future, they should have
more experience with the modern world and this
guarantees them to achieve something they want
to. (가족이랑 지내면 왜 이런 경험을 하지 못하는지 설명이 필요합니다)
In my case, I had long summer and winter vacations every year when I was
in high school. At that time, family members and a lot of relatives usually
came over to my house and wanted to have a great time with playing something.
But, I tried to experience Intern an internship
and any part time jobs that I wanted because I would like wanted
to do something that could develop myself. As a result, I could compare the
several IT companies due to a lot of experience and enter the company that I
really wanted to enter.
On top of that, separating from their families would offer allow them to be free from parent’s interruptions. Today, many people is are suffering from managing their stress. They even
get stress in the house since their parents used to talk them to be
professional in their field. Therefore, younger people would want to escape
both their society and house.
Studies at Seoul National University have shown that there is a are substantial family effects on their young adults’ stress. Researchers
conducted a survey and students overwhelmingly replied that parents, not
competition in their workplace, contributed them caused them to get stressed. They
also noted that their parents even set strict rules at home since these
forceful rules will make their children to be
successful in the future. This study offers strong evidence that how younger
people are getting stressed at home and thus
they feel uncomfortable
To sum up, there are many advantages for students (대상이 young
adults인가요 students인가요?) by directly experiencing with
the actual world. Also, they feel happy when
they get independent from their parents since
they get too much stress due to their forceful rules
at home. All things considered, I believe that it is better for younger adults
to separate from their parents as quickly as
possible.