Both the lecture and the reading passage deal with the mass beaching of whales. The lecturer argues that the reasons described by the reading passage are insufficient due to the important facts regarding the whale's mass beaching. This contradicts the reading passage's assertion that many theories have been announced to explain the unusual dying behavior of whales on beaches.
First of all, the speaker argues that the illness is not a usual cause of the beaching behavior. Eventhough Even though the whales are a socal animals, it is not usuall usual that healthy whales are infected from sick whales. (띄어쓰기) The speaker explians that if some whales have sickness, a healthy whale will be trapped to carry them out them. This casts doubt on the reading passsage passage, which states that the illed ill whales which infected by alot a lot of microbes can infect to the other whales.
In addition, according to the lecturer, we have hunderes hundreds of natural earthquakes every year and there are very few earthquakes negatively affecting to whales. The speaker maintains that the energy in the lectromagnetics electromagnetic waves from earthquakes are not strong enough to kill them. This rebuffs the reading passage's claim that whales can be caused to confuse or panic from natural explanations involving earthquakes.
The final point made by the lecturer is that the sonar equipment used by naval vessels is not a possible reason about whales' mass beaching. The lecturer asserts that the navigation system that used to map out obstacles in sea is vulnarable vulnerable. This refutes the reading passage's argument that the invention of sonar equipment allows whales to be found on beaches.
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