■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic :it is better to study alone than in a group |
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▶ Your Answer :There's much controversy about studying in a group is better choice than studying alone. some says that studying with members is preferable , while others do not. both sides have their own reasons to support their view. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that studying by oneself is an wise choice. There are several reasons as follow. To begin with, When studying with friends, they tend to talk about unnecessary things. because friends know each other, they ask their friends about personal questions. When I was a freshman, I was given an assignment that required to investigate well-known company in Korea and to make a team with some one else. so, I made a team with my best friend. meeting due to a team project, my friend asked me about my girl friend and gave me needless advises. This unconducive talking continued each time we met. as a result, we could not concentrate on our work and we were given disappointing grad. On the top of that, A study was conducted by Yonsei university to determine whether a one's style of studying could affect an amount of studying time. There were two group monitored. The first group was formed of people who study with others, the other group consisted of students who study alone. both group were asked to record substantive time. The researchers compared the each groups's time spent for studying and concluded that the group who studying by oneself studied 2 hours more per day than those who studied together. This was because the students who studied solely could study anytime and anywhere, They did not have to go somewhere one of a study group wants. In a nut shell , studying alone has the advantage of allowing to learn anywhere at any time he or she wants and preventing from talking about unrelated matter. all things considered, I firmly believe that studying oneself is better choice. |
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