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Some people think that there is a better method to learn about the country rather than by going to museums. However, I have a different idea. First of all, the museum possesses numerous objects that contain cultural information. Secondly, they can provide a detailed information with the visitor.
To begin with, by going to museums, they can get an opportunity to experience the past day's lifestyle vividly. By participating in a program offered from museums and seeing the past day's objects which reflected certain period's lifestyle, they can understand about some country's culture and history. For example, last year, when I traveled to Japan, I went to the famous museums in Kyoto. There were was a lot of contents that allow visitors experience Japanese culture such as traditional play, food and so on. Also, by seeing the exhibition and artifacts in the museums I could learn about past day's lifestyle vividly. especially experience of their past day's cooking and tried the traditional costume was very impressive because it is hard to experience in another place. Also since that museum building is the reconstruction of their old house, I could understand their architectural style and meaningful values by seeing the numerous traditional pattern in the house.
On top of that, a museum is the best place to learn a deep information than other platforms. Since they should offer the high qualified explanation to visitors, museum always makes a huge effort to convey professional information about own culture and history in various ways. Hence, the visitor can learn about country deeply. For instance, my country's famous museum hired the employee who only had 2 years of study course of culture and history. Also, They have a schedule that practicing explanations 3 hours a day. Moreover, they offered a detailed information with pamphlet too. With this various effort to help understand, the people who visited the museum can learn a history and lifestyle of the certain country.
To sum up, a museum can provide the various way to experience the culture and history also devote to their information conveyance than other places.
In this regard, I agree that museum is the best place to learn about some country.
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