Writing Task 1 Template:
서론 : 주어진 문제를 한 문장으로 paraphrasing 한다
The given bar chart compares the Internet usage of American boys and girls since 2000 in a five-year interval in the percentage scale.
일반적 경향 : 그래프에서 가장 중요한 내용을 두 문장으로 요약한다.
It is clear that the ratio of boys using the Internet has always been higher than that of girls, but the rate of girls’ usage has grown much faster than in the boys’ group. In general, Internet usage in both genders has risen significantly and consistently during the whole research period until the present day.
본문 1 :
When it comes to the boys’ pattern, only a fifth of them knew how to use the Internet at the start of the study. However, over the five years that figure increased almost 2.5 times and kept rising to include 60 percent of boys by 2010. At present, using the Internet is popular among most male students.
본문 2 :
In terms of female users, just one in ten girls was merely interested in accessing the Internet in 2000. Surprisingly, four times as many girls were using the Internet in 2005 compared to the previous survey year. The rate continued to increase to around 55 percent and then 90 percent in 2010 and at present respectively.
Writing Task 2 Template : 질문에서 그대로 베껴오면 안 되고, 계속 다른 형식으로 표현해야 함!!!
서론 : Topic paraphrasing + Answering
When it comes to studying history, there is a growing debate over whether we are wasting our time and resources examining the past when we could focus on the present and future. Although current events deserve our attention, I believewe should place a strong emphasis on history if we do not want to repeat past tragedies.
본론 1 : Topic sentence + Supporting sentence (because) + Specific example (for example)
There is an opinion that being knowledgeable in a history of a certain country or the world does not have a significant impact on today’s life. Some amount of information written in the history books can be wrong, because no one throughout the world knows exactly when some special events have happened. History is always written by winners, therefore, those people could write invalid information in order to leave their own names in history forever.
((It seems positive that the young are fascinated by fashion. First of all, young people who take an interest in their appearance by following the latest fashions are more likely to look attractive. This is because people are naturally inclined to imitate those who look good, and most of us judge people by appearance to a certain extent whether we like to admit it or not. In addition, fashion is an expression of culture and so it can encourage younger people to be more engaged in society. By being interested in new trends they are less likely to feel excluded or lonely and that is a positive effect.))
본론 2 :
Although some peripheral records can be fabricated, studying our past is still valuable in contemporary society. An accurate understanding of history not only helps save us from further tragic events but also allows us to prosper in our lives. Those who claim it is irrelevant to concentrate on events of the past ignore the value of the examples set for us by our ancestors. If we do not study those lessons then we risk going through some of the horrors of previous ages like the World War all over again. Equally, we can continue the progress of previous civilisations if we find out how they advanced themselves. Everything we enjoy today is the product of the past, and we should maintain that trend in as positive a way as possible.
For the reasons mentioned above, I totally disagree with the opinion that studying history is worthless because through reflecting our past we could prevent horrific conflicts and boost our civilisation.
1-1) In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the threat of extinction faced by various species of animals and plants, and both individual and government efforts are needed to tackle this phenomenon.
1-2) For the reasons mentioned above, I totally disagree with the opinion that studying history is worthless because through reflecting our past we could prevent horrific conflicts and boost our civilization.
2) In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against whether we should aim to resolve issues like poverty before focusing too much on this space race, but I am convinced that the government should try their best to explore space race.