◆ Delivery (Pronunciation and Intonation)
- the speaker 발음과 인토네이션이 부자연스럽습니다.
- peak (?) 발음을 더 길게 끌어주셔야 합니다. 현재는 pig/pick에 더 가까운 발음을 하고 계십니다.
◆ Language Use (Grammar and Vocabulary)
- he talks about that she attend the conference
-> she talks about this one time when she attended a conference
- and she stay hotel
-> and she stayed at a hotel
- she has good impress about hotel
-> she had a good impression of the hotel at first
- but finally she has bad impression because of taste of steak
-> but overall (or in the end), she had a bad impression because of the taste of the steak she had there
-> but finally는 '그러나 마침내' 의미가 강합니다.
- she wait one hour because for solve problem
-> she waited one hour to solve the problem.
- she talked with husband about the hotel was terrible
-> she talked with her husband about how terrible the hotel was
◆ Topic Development (Contents)
- 주요 내용은 있지만 설명이 빠진 부분들이 있는 것 같습니다. 예를 들어 she waited one hour부분은 무엇을 기다렸다는 것이니 알 수 없습니다 - 앞에서는 문제를 taste of steak라고 해서 이해하기가 어렵습니다. 설명을 full로 해주세요.
◆ Comments
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- 문법 실수가 많습니다. 문법에 더 신경 써주세요.
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