■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading

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The chart below shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed movie genres in UK cinemas in 1995, 2000, and 2005 as a percentage of the total earnings of the US film industry for each year. 

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The chart illustrates the profit ratio of seven different genres in movies which were shown in American theaters during 1995, 2000 and 2005; the sum of percentages indicates the total profit in the US film industry. 

Overall, it is clear that there was a gradual downward trend in Action and Drama, meanwhile, the percentage of profits in comedy as well as in animation ascended moderately in every five years. In contrast to other genres, Thriller, Musicals and Animation (주어를 정확히 해주셔야 합니다. 액션과 드라마가 감소세를 보인 게 아니라, 액션, 드라마로부터 얻은 수입의 비중이 감소세를 보인 것이죠. 뒤의 스릴러 이하 부분도 마찬가지입니다.) remained just under 10% over the given period. 

Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that Drama which had the highest profit, peaked at approximately 27% and consequently showed a significant different difference in profit compared to the rest in 1995. After 5 years later, comedy has surpasses Drama (참고로 고유명사가 아니므로 장르 관련해서는 다 소문자 시작해주시면 됩니다. 다른 데에도 다 바꿔주세요~) by occupying 25% of the total market. Simultaneously, Drama showed a decrease of profit by around 10% in 2005. Whereas, whereas that of Triller and Musicals rose moderately to around 8%. In the final year, a rapid surge was shown in Adventure, reaching approximately 24% which was double the percentage of the previous year. While musical dipped noticeably from around 13% to 3% and hence became the lowest percentage (여기도 주어 구성이 명확해야 합니다.).  

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주어가 정확하게 갖춰진 문장들도 있었던 반면, 그렇지 못한 문장들도 있었습니다. Task 1에서는 주어가 부정확할 경우 GRA 뿐만 아니라 TR 쪽에도 영향을 주기 때문에 확실히 신경써서 작성해주셔야 해요. 또한 이전 글과 마찬가지로 자잘한 문법 오류와 관련해서도 주의해주세요~수고하셨습니다 :)