2010년 5월 29일 아이엘츠 실제 기출 문제라고 하네요~
8점 짜리 모범 예문이라니까 보시고 도움 되셨으면 좋겠네용.
Many young people nowadays leave schools with negative attitude towards learning.
Why does this happens?
What do you think could encourage young people to have a positive attitude?
I agree that many students leave school with a generally negative attitude towards their education,and the reasons for this attitude are innumerable and very complex, affecting every individual in a slightly different way.But, I believe that the main reasons students have a unfavorable impression of their schooling is a combination of pressure to conform to others ideals,and a lack of basic freedom. Schools around the world is not just one part of students' life, it completely dominates all facets of their life until graduation.
Students, are never really given a chance to enjoy their day to day life, play with friends, or spend free time on a hobby. They have one goal and one goal only, perform well on the college entrance exam, entering colleges with no idea of who they are, what they are good at, and what their true potential in. Schools to many of them feel just like a factory that mass produces average quality parts for the machine of society, which has no humn face on it, no sense of wonder or curiosity.
Education has become a monotonous routine of learning by rote for a test on a seemingly useless subject, not an opportunity to explore and share ideas and knowledge.
If students are to enjoy education, they need more opportunity and choice, not an incredibly focussed currculum than only emphasizes a few key subjects, such as physics,bilolgy,and chemistry. Very few people will ever use these subjects later in life, so expecting everybodu to study hard for these subjects is a little impractical. Students konw that what they study in school has little practical balue but dominates their life, so they need more choices and less pressure.
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