IELTS 라이팅의 비결은 좋은 문장들을 많이 읽어야 작문도 잘할 수 있습니다. 아래의 문장들은 IELTS 모범 예문 중 가장 핵심 부분을 추려 낸 것입니다. 만약 IELTS 라이팅 연습할 시간이 짧으신 분이라면~ 이 아래 문장들을 외워 보시는 것도 도움이 많이 될거라 생각해요!
 
According to a recent survey ,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.
The latest surveys show that Quiet a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.
No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.
Nowadays ,many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately ,for most young people ,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

In view of the seriousness of this problem ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.
 
Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.
 
An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of
city .However ,this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents ,who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.
 
Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus ,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.
 
There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem :the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.
 
An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.
 
 
 
 

A proper part-time job does not occupy student's too much time .In fact ,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study .As an old saying goes :All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy

Any government which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.

An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.
When it comes to education ,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
 
The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.

Although this view is widely held ,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
 
No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.

People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer .
 
 
 
 

IELTS 아카데믹 라이팅 9 점짜리
 
다들 열공 하고 계시죠?  band 9점 짜리 에세이들 입니다.
색깔로 표시해놓은 phrases 가 있는데 그거 위주로 보시면 아카데믹 라이팅에 대한 기본 틀과 
진행 과정 ( statement->reason->evidence and comparison or contrast)
그리고 유용한 구절들(It is said to be true that , this is probably because 등등) 을 이용 하실 수 있으실거에요.
 
이 에세이들을 읽으면 딱 느낌이 아~매끄럽게 잘쓰였고 설득력이 있네. 구조도 잘 짜여져 있고 단어 사용도 잘 되있구나 라고 느껴지더라구요. 참고 하셔서 도움 많이 되시길 바랄께요. :D
 

Writing task 1

 
The graph shows changes in the gap between US energy consumption and production since 1950. It also estimates trends up to 2025.
 Between 1950 and 1970 both production and consumption increased from just over 30 units to about 65, and although consumption was consistently higher, the difference was marginal during this period.
However, production grew only gradually over the next 30 years to reach 70 units in 2000. In contrast, growth in consumption was steeper and more fluctuating, reaching 95 units by 2000. Energy imports needed to bridge this gap therefore increased from very little in 1970 to a substantial 25 units in 2000.
 Projections up to 2025 indicate that this trend is likely to continue, with the gap between production and consumption widening. By 2025 it is expected that consumption will reach 140 units, while production will reach only 90, so more than 30% of energy consumed [50units] will have to be imported.
 Overall, the graph indicated that energy production in the US is not keeping up with consumption, so imports will continue to increase.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Writing task 2

 
It is certainly true that today traffic in cities throughout the world has become a major problem. This is obvious from the number of vehicles on our roads and the amount of pollution they cause. Probably the traffic problem is due to individuals travelling for work, study or shopping purposes and this is evident in the rush hours we experience every morning and evening.

 It is also true that today such daily commuting is not always necessary because people can do these things from home. We can see this in the options Information Technology gives us today. For example, on-line work, distance learning and shopping facilities are all available via the Internet.

 However, even if everyone had access to the technology and the opportunity to work from home, it is unrealistic to think that everyone would want to. Even though the technology for working, studying or shopping on-line makes this option a possibility, nevertheless it would mean people had less freedom of choice and less social contact in their lives. This would have a large impact on society as a whole.

 So, in conclusion, I think that while this practice could reduce the traffic problems in our cities, it is most unlikely to be and acceptable solution. In terms of other solutions, perhaps we need to think more carefully about facilitating public transport and limiting private cars in our city centres. The development of public transport that is not road-based, such as sky trains or subways, would probably be a more acceptable alternative measure to reduce jams on our roads.