아이엘츠 작문 문장 (전환) - 예문 포함

1) In view of the above-mentioned negative factors/disadvantage(s)/defects in A, peoples second thought is to...
(e.g. In view of the above-mentioned negative factors in raising the output, our second thought is to improve the quality of products.)

2) To counter/offset/counteract/cancel undesirable/side/ill effects/influence/results of A, B is put forward/proposed/advanced as another better course/ solution to...
(e.g. To counter the undesirable effects of rigid administration, emotional investment is advanced as another better course to success in business.)

3) In their efforts to battle against dark side/incongruous elements A h as brought along with it, however, people come up with another approach/solution /course to...namely...
(e.g. In their efforts to battle against the dark side the examination-oriented education has brought along with it, educators come up with another approach to the problem, namely the quality-oriented education.)

4) In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of A, B can serve as a better step/move/advance in the right direction/to ward the solution for the problem of...
(e.g. In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better move toward the solution for the problem of energy crisis.)

5) So when it comes to an effective remedy for/a good counter-balance to the problems/limits/faults/weaknesses in A, people naturally think of B.
(e.g. So when it comes to an effective remedy for the weaknesses in competition, people naturally think of cooperation.)

6) But it has also brought along with it the negative effect/disadvantage /weakness that...

7) However, it is not without limits/problems/faults/defects, for example, ...

8) Like anything else, it also has its own dark side, as evidenced in...

9) For/Despite/In spite of the advantages/benefits/positive effects A has, it has suffered from/posed some disadvantages/harm/negative effects.

10) To attain this goal, however, we still have much work to do/many obstacles to remove.

1 위의 언급한 A의  마이너스의 요소 / 불리한 요소 / 결함에 의하여사람들의 생각은

2 A의 불리한 영향/결과에 대립/반대/취소 하기 위해서, B라는 더 좋은 해결 방법을 제시했다.

3 그러나 사람들은 A로 인해 발생되는 마이너스 / 어울리지 않는 요소들의 대으앟기 위해 더 좋은 방법을 제시했다.

4 A의 결점과 비교했을때, B는 문제를 해결하는데 있어서 옳은 방향으로 한걸음 더 나아갔다.

5 A의 관한 문제 / 잘못 / 약점등의 효과적인 구제 / 평형 방법으로 사람들은 자연스럽게  B를 떠올렸다.

6 그러나 동시에  마이너스 반응 / 불리한 요소 / 약점 등을 초래한다. 

7 그러나 결코  문제 / 상처 / 결점등에 대한 제한이 없다. 예를 들면. ..

8 다른 어떤 사물과 같이 그것 또한  좋지 않은 한 면이 있다.…이것이 바로 명확한 증거이다. 

9 물론  A는 우세하면 면  / 장점이 있지만, 다른 한편으로는 단점, / 위험/ 나쁜점도 있다. 

10 그러나 이 목표를 달성하기 위해서, 우리는 많은 일을 해야 하고, 또한 많은 장애물들을 없애야 한다.