채점 기준 | Fluency and Coherence | Pronunciation | Lexical Resource | Grammatical Range and Accuracy | Total |
Score (9점 만점) | 6 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 |
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Comment | Q: 누군가 나를 inspire 해서 interesting experience 를 한 경험
A: Four years ago, I went to see a concert with my best friend 지은. We have been best friends to each other for 13 years. I met her for the first time at an academy when I was a high school student, and we were quickly getting got close because her personality was really compatible with mine. One day, when we were both university students, she suggested that we should go to see a concert together. It was a concert where 10 famous Korean bands were going to perform, 2 of which were being my favorite. I had never been to a concert at that time, so I said yes because I wanted to experience something new. It was held in 세종 university in Seoul, which takes took me an hour by subway to get there from my apartment. I liked the concert, because when I saw the singers with my own eyes and appreciated the music with excellent acoustics, it gave me goosebumps. It was also nice that I got to know some singers with great singing skills. However, I didn’t like that our seats were too far from the stage. As we were both still students back then, we couldn’t afford to book seats that were closer to the stage, which were way more expensive than ours. Nevertheless, it’s still one of my fun memories that I made with my bestie 지은. Its photos are still on my Instagram. I thank her for this new experience.
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