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문제: Describe a city that you have been to and would like to visit again
You should say
When you visited it
What you did there
What it was like
And explain why you would like to visit it again
녹음 후 transcript:
Despite
the fact that I have been to so many cities and countries, I can take Istanbul
as my favorite. And, I first visited (녹음본에서는 ed발음이 명확하게 나지 않은 상황입니다.) this city when I was a middle school
student, and it was in 2011. After that moment, I was captivated (여기는 조금 더 빠르게 넘어가야 하는데, 사전을 한번 들어보세요!) by this city, and
I have been to several times more after that moment. And this city is really
fascinating for me for several reasons. Firstly, I really like the atmosphere
of the city where traditionality and modernity is compatible, and in Istanbul I can
encounter both contemporary style skyscrapers and very old mosques and castles.
I really respect the historical value of this city, which is the previous capital of the
Ottoman Empire. As I have been majoring in Middle Eastern History, I’m really
attracted by the fact this city had been the center of the one of the greatest
empires in history. And, the picturesque scenery can be seen anywhere in this
city including some places nearby the strait of Bosporus, and it is really
beautiful. And I can also meet a myriad of my Turkish friends there. And, we
can hang out together and have meals, and there are a lot of delicious cuisines
that I like including Iskender Kebab and Kofta. Therefore, it is natural for me
to want to visit city when I can. When the situation becomes better, I mean,
after the corona virus ends, I really want to make another visit…
총평: 원어민은 아니시니까 당연히 발음이나 기타 등등에서 약간 아쉬운 부분은 있지만, 전달력, 즉 막힘없이 매끄럽게 술술 이어나가는 점이 상당히 좋으시고, 여기서 어느정도의 점수는 벌어갈 겁니다. 대신 실제 원어민 채점관을 앞두고도 이런 식으로 자연스럽고 자신감있게 말씀하실 수 있도록 꼭! 사람 앞에서 연습을 해주세요! 사람 앞에서 하는 게, 제가 표시해드린 빨간+파란 부분을 고치는 것보다 훨씬 중요합니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)