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Comment | - Part 2 Describe something you cannot live without (not a computer/phone). You should say: what it is what you do with it how it helps you in your life and explain why you can’t live without it. In fact, there are many items that I cannot live without, but I have to say my lip balm is the one that first pops into my mind. I It takes only 30 minutes from my apartment by bus. I apply some amounts of this lip balm to my lips. More specifically, I apply small amounts often all day, and I apply huge amounts right before going to bed. As for the question how it helps me in my life, it keeps my lips moist. There is an important reason why I cannot live without it. Without this lip balm, my lips are very dry. If my lips are dry, I cannot stop biting my lips to remove the dead skin cells. Sometimes I even bleed like Dracula. Since I keep biting my lips, I cannot concentrate on anything. As a result, my lip balm helps me concentrate on my study or work by keeping my lips moist. That's the reason why I always carry this lip balm in my bag. |
질문에 맞는 답변을 잘 작성해주셨습니다. 다만 can get과 got의 차이점에 유의하시어 답변해주시는 것이 중요할 듯합니다. 수고하셨습니다.