There is a
controversial issue whether students should be required
to attend classes or not. This is an intriguing question because
opinions regarding this topic can be different rallying on individual
perspectives. In my opinion, however, I support an the idea that it is not necessary for students to
participate in their classes for the following
reasons.
To begin with, the
development of technology has made it possible for students to listen to their classes without constantly attending classes
them. In many universities, internet classes have has been utilized for many
students, which means that there are no reasons for attending obligatory
classes in person. Also, many students are
likely to prefer to participate in internet
classes. For example, in my experience, when I was in university years, there are
were many internet classes throughout all
classes. Some classes provided students with both internet
classes or and attending
classes. This enabled
students to study at home without any hamper disturbance. From this
benefit, I utilized the internet classes, and could get higher GPA with
scholarship. Therefore, it is not helpful to attend obligatory
classes obligatory. (위 문단은 필참 수업이 좋지 않다, 라는 점보다 인터넷 수업이
더 효율적이다, 라는 포인트를 잡아서 마지막 문장이 아쉽습니다)
Second, students
can experience various things without attending required classes. University
students are also adults. This means that they are able to effectively and precisely
select their purpose regarding their future. Not
only that, students are likely to think that sometimes classes are less
important than other things. To be specific, students who have various
experiences are more likely to have a good better
opportunities to get a job. In my country, it is reported that many
companies choose to hire and work with the person who have has various experience. This is because creativity
made by those experiences allows companies to earn a lot of profit. Also, considering the bad economy in my country, hiring
those people is an effective way to avoid this bad economy atmosphere. (How? need an explanation) From these reasons, it is
not beneficial to attend classes necessarily. (굳이 수업을 듣지 않고 여행을 가거나 다양한 경험을 하는게 좋다고 하셨지만, 수업을 들으면서 주말에 여행을 가도 되는 거고, 휴학을 하고 다양한
경험을 체험할 수 있습니다. 수업 몇 개를 빠진다고 더 미래가 밝아진다는 논리는 좋지 않습니다.)
In conclusion, I
firmly believe that it is not necessary for students to attend classes. It is
my belief that my argument concerning this topic should not be underestimated
with the reasons mentioned above.