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The line graph illustrates how the average
temperature has changed during one year in Japan. In addition, the bar graph
describes the average precipitation of Japan throughout the year in Japan.
Overall, it is clear that both the average
temperature and precipitation reach their pinnacle during the summer and hit a
low during the winter. (여기서 엔터 한 번 더 쳐주셔야 합니다. 이것도 점수에 들어가므로 주의해주세요!)
According to the first graph, starting at
-5 Celsius, the average temperature shows a steady upward trend until it
records its highest point at 25 Celsius in August. In contrast, it declines all
the way through the end of the period, reaching 0 Celsius.
In the second chart, the average
precipitation is below 50mm in both the first quarter and the fourth quarter.
Meanwhile, it gradually increases during the second quarter, reaching just
above 100mm. It is noteworthy that the figure skyrocketed in July, close to
threefold of that of June. Furthermore, it keeps rising to 350mm in August.
Then, it plummets to one-third of that of August in September. (표현상 크게 문제는 없었지만, 내용 관련해서는 분석이 너무 1차원적이어서 보완이 필요한데, 이에 대해서는 총평에서 말씀드리겠습니다.) |