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Recently, the issue of internet communicate communication has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that although there are some disadvantages to development of internet communicate communication, there they are outweighed by the advantages, while others argue otherwise. I wholeheartedly agree with the former stand. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion. On the one hand, there are those who claim that communication of the internet has a negative effect on people. Proponents about this argument insist that internet communication makes older people to difficultly harder to participate in the conversation. To be more specific, most older people have trouble in using the internet, which can cause older people to a decrease less participation in conversation. Another argument is that internet communication is likely to making make loose relationship. This means is that face-to-face communication allows people to have emotional communication but communication through internet has limited for expression, which has negative effect on relationship. Given these points, some people hold the view that internet communication is more likely to have negative effect on conversation. My opinion, however, is that internet communicate communication has positive effect on people life. Perhaps the most compelling reason is that internet communication has not limited does not limit space and time, which means is that if internet allows people who want to conversation with other country people to doing conversation. Another convincing reason is that internet communication makes people to save their time. For exemplify, research conducted by Seoul National University has demonstrated that companies based on the Internet work environment reduced their working hours by more than 3 hours on average compared to companies that adopted face-to-face communication work environments. In light of the above, I find these more persuasive. In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinion about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, I fully support the view that the benefits of internet communication outnumber the drawbacks for the discussed above.
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