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These days, we can see people taking a trip overseas
more and more. This trend causes positive and negative aspects to tourists.
I will explain in this essay the merits and the demerits
of traveling abroad.
It is true that traveling overseas can offer special
experiences that are difficult to have where we live, such as riding a camel
in desert. For example, they can experience riding a camel in a desert. Added to this, traveling abroad expands the perspective of the
world because travelers come across others and freely mingle with
those who come from various countries, exchanging various points of view, including culture or history, while traveling. In
this sense, traveling abroad provides tourists with unusual experiences and
opportunities to broaden their horizons.
However, there are also demerits because going abroad for a trip requires a
large quantity of money. It is obvious for travelers to spend a lot of money on traveling
expenses, such as booking flights, accommodation, transportation, and so on, which can be a huge financial burden on them. Furthermore, tourists might encounter risky
situations while
traveling. This dangerous circumstance could be caused by
activities, such as bungee jumping or scuba diving in which they participate with
curiosity. Also, if injured by this circumstance, it would be challenging for them to
ask for help due to language barriers. (* 위의 문장이 문법적으로 올바른가요? if injured 라고 썻는데, 뒤의 it would 구문에서 주어가 it 인데 if 구문의 주어 생략이 가능한지 궁금합니다) 이 문장의 경우 문법적으로 올바른지 문의해주셨는데 이 경우 문법적으로 어색한 점은 없으며 충분히 if 구문의 주어를 생략하여 사용할 수 있습니다 To sum up, when it comes to the benefits of travel, it can
provide travelers with opportunities to get special experiences and widen their
point of view. However, travelers have to consider that traveling
overseas costs a lot,
even before leaving for a trip and they should remind of various risky situations they might
face in foreign countries. Though, if travelers always put safety as a priority
while taking a trip, travel has more
advantages than disadvantages.
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