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There are many people who allow their
children to care for a pet on their own these days because it gives many
benefits to develop a sense of responsibility. However, some others have had
mixed results on this issue, so it is clear that parents may have diverse ideas
about this.
To begin with, letting children raise pets
by themselves have has a lot of advantages on developing their personalities. For
example, if children know how to take care of their pets in a proper way for
pets' well-being, they would be more responsible and understandable of doing
something. Moreover, young children would learn the consequences of their
actions, which they have to deal with during a process of breeding pets. (이것에 대한 구체적인 사례를 드는 것도 좋습니다. 어차피 일상적인 사항이기 때문에 그리 어렵지도 않을 것이고요.) Therefore, rearing pets on children own would benefit to teach them life skills
that require in later lives. (이 문장은 rearing pets on children own 이 부분이 조금 틀어졌으므로 다시 한번 확인해주세요~)
Nevertheless, some people assert that
breeding pets by their offspring would give them stressful and confusing
experiences because it is very difficult for them to do so in an early age. For
example, if a child gives some food that is detrimental to animal's health such
as a chocolate, a pet would die after eating it. Through this incident, the
child might have a hard time or become traumatized about raising pets because
of a guilty conscience. Thus, it is evident that breeding
pets by young people thoroughly provides a stressful situation, in which they are not
ready for yet.
To sum up, it is apparent that even though there
are many advantages for young children to promote good personalities, drawbacks
from letting young offspring care for a pet outweigh its advantages. (266
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