Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?
Nowadays, majority of people argue that essential services such as education and healthcare should be free and supported by the government. In my point of view, government’s assistance would be necessary and it has more advantages to society.
Everyone in all social class can obtain same benefits of medical welfare service since every citizens do have rights to get equal treatment and should not be stressed about their medical care. To illustrate an example, in Korea, every hospital is run by the government of Korea. Everyone is welcome to visit clinics and gets a medical check up regularly to maintain their health with low costs of insurance system supported by the government. Although access to comfortable personal treatment is one of advantages to private healthcare, health is a basic human needs so that medical service is supposed to be provided equally to all citizens.
In addition, complementary education policy by the government should be necessary in order to national and society development. People can improve quality of their lives, have confident for better life through education. In this regard, everyone should have free education support until high school, which encourages young students to set their future goal. As for higher education, individuals should pay for college and university to obtain advanced educational opportunities such as professional academic studies or skilled experiment. It should be optional depending on their situation.
In conclusion, since everyone has rights to get equal healthcare and educational service, it needs to be funded by the government. Only for higher education, students should be responsible to pay for advanced educational chances.
지난번에 같은걸로 올렸었는데 입장 하나만 다루라고 조언해주셔서 다시 작성해 보았습니다..
education 이랑 healthcare를 하나로 묶어서 작성하려하니 꽤 힘드네요 ㅠㅠ
조언부탁드립니다!