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The bar charts illustrate the percentage of computer ownership from
2002 to 2010, with changing computer ownership the rights >> 중복은 절대 좋지 않습니다 by educational levels for the same
period.
According to the first bar chart, the rate of computer ownership
increased steadily during that time>> that time? when?. In 2002, the percentage started below 60%,
but it reached nearly 80% in 2010, which recorded about a 20% increase. Turing to the second bar chart, in all of the groups, the year 2010 had
the high percentages more than the year of 2002. The most outstanding feature,
however, was the same trend in 2002 and in 2010. In other words.>> 끊어주세요 또한 말이 좀 애매합니다 가장 현저한 특징은 같은 추세다 As the level of education
was higher and higher, the percentage of computer ownership was larger and
larger. In 2002 and in 2010, the cases of people who have over master’s degree was
about 70% and 90% respectively>> 그 상황은 거의 70% 90%였다 단순히 수식 부분을 빼고서도 동사와 주어가 내용 상관관계가 맺어져야 합니다, which was approximately seven times and two
times as many as the case of people who have under high school diploma
respectively.>> ??
To sum up, the rate of computer ownership increased continuously for
that period. Besides, it seems that there is a linkage between the percentage
of computer ownership and the level of education.
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