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The maps compare the differences between
the Town centre in 1700 and the constructions that have taken placed in nowadays.
Overall, in the past, the most of parts in the town centre were used for agriculture and this place became commercialized
despite the church, hotel, market square and shops that remained the same except for
the introduction of new block spaces given. Also, it is interesting to note that
the size of roads became wider.
In 1700, a small number of buildings was
being placed; Goode farm, Stables, fields and Steggle farms located named
clockwise from the North in that order. These buildings were replaced by various facilities.
Goode farm was replaced by for a Car park and houses, Stables were replaced by for Block of
flats and Steggle farm was replaced by the new roads named Steggle Road.
As the town centre got gets bigger, the more
facilities have been introduced. The More houses have been built in the Northeast
and South parts of the town centre and the number size of shops increased from 3 to 5.
The supermarket has been established along with the new roads introduced at the left
corner of the super market as well as the roundabout.
Score: 7 Comment: 바뀐 점을 잘 설명해주셨습니다. 다만 문법에 많이 틀리시고 계십니다. 시제/수동태/article 활용/에 주로 틀리시고 계십니다. 문법 연습을 조금 더 하시는 것을 추천합니다. Collocation에도 조금 더 신경을 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. Shops의 경우 size 가 늘어난게 아니라 개수가 늘어났습니다. 수고 하셨습니다. |