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There are several differences between before and after of the construction works and after one.
Firstly, in the first map, there are no facilities for travelling. As it is cleary seen from that map, there are nothing without trees. The lenghth of the island is 250 meters long. And >> 문두에 and also so but or 를 스지 않습니다 in the west side, the >> beach 에는 the 를 붙여주세요 small beach is located. >> 이미 지도로 나와있어서 알 수 있는 부분은 the를 붙여주시는 것이 맞습니다
On the other hand, the second map has many ammenities for travellers. In the south side of the island, there is a pier which people easily use to travel >> 쉽게 갈 수 있도록 되어 있다고 지도 상에 표시가 있나요? . And it is connected to reception area by the vehicle track. People also are also able to six accomadations closed to the area>> 사람들은 그 지역까지 여섯개의 닫힌 숙소를 할 수 있다 절대 말이 안 됩니다 There are six accomodations close to the area 정도면 되겠네요, which are directly linked with the beach by footpath. Over the beach, in the most west side of the island, there is a newly constructed swimming area. Therefore, after constructions, the island was dramatically changed dramatically to be used to travel conveniently for the taste of tourism.
In conclusion, after the construction, the island became more acceptable for traveler. And people can enjoy traveling more conveniently.
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Task Achievement - 6 Coherence and Cohesion - 5 Lexical Resource - 6 Grammatical Range and Accuracy - 5
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