What are effects of tourism industry on a country’s economy?
In the recent years, tourism industry has grown exponentially due to >> due to는 부정적인 의미의 ~때문에란 성격이 짙습니다 with 이 괜찮겠네요 the fact that it has a number of effects on the economic growth. Some people, however, say that it does not help the country to be developed. In this essay, I am to explore why I absolutely disagree with their opinion for several reasons.
First of all, the nations that a lot of tourist attractions are located are able to make a huge profit from visitors. This is because people spending much money on the local food or souvenirs are a major income source. It is shown in an article on a sightseeing country that tourism industry has accounted for almost 90% of her>> who her? GDP which is the total value of goods and services produced within a country in a year. If the economically impoverished nations such as the >> 필리핀은 the가 붙습니다 Philippines or Thailand do not have tourist spots, they will get >> get 동사는 좋지 않습니다 become 혹은 be increasingly 정도라고 해주세요 poorer. Therefore, tourist business is one of the most important factors contributing to the economic development.
In addition, local people can have a job created from tourism. It would help the country’s local economy. To be specific, the opportunity of working as a guide for foreigners or selling trinkets on the beach would be given to natives by many local companies. The reason why this is very significant in the nation is that it generates extra tax revenues, such as taxes for an airport and a hotel taxes, which can be used for housing, hospitals, >> 세가지 이상의 나열 중 마지막 항목의 and 앞엔 콤마를 붙여줍니다 and schools. Consequently, employment leads to economic growth.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that tourism industry is beneficial for both attraction for tourist attraction and local people, which plays a leading role in the growing national economy.
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