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This table illustrates provides information about how long people who live in someland>>?? spend their spare time on six categories. (Watching TV/videos, socialising with less or more 4 people, individual exercise, group exercise, and cinema) -> 5개 인데 나머지 하난 뭔가요?
To begin with, it can be clear that the most popular type to spend time activity is watching TV and videos in all over groups. In old age groups age ones, the number of someland>>?? people watching TV/videos is approximately five times than the figure for sociallising people. However, to watch movies in big theatre going to the cinema is the least favorite leisure activity in most all age groups.
Secondly, there is a significant difference between the figures of people who are less than 30 years old and those who are more than 30 year-old at their age of more than 30. That is, the young >> the young 은 어린 아이들을 말합니다 the younger group 혹은 the former 라고 해주세요 prefer to communicate with over 4 people, but the old>> 위와 마찬가지입니다 prefer to socialize with 4 or less people. The number of people working out in groups becomes decreases as people get >> get 동사 피해주세요 become older, >> 접속사가 없는데 어떻게 두 문장이 이어졌나요? even no one in old ages more than 60 years old do not joins group sports.
In conclusion, there is inevitable differences on spending leisure time following with ages.
someland 가 뭘 의미하는지 모르겠습니다 어떤 것의 이름이라면 Someland 가 돼야 할텐데 잘 모르겠구요 항목에도 어떤 6개인지가 불분명합니다 문장들 중 비슷한 구조의 문장들이 많습니다 group of 60 years old 도 되고 접속사 문제도 그랬구요
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