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The bar charts elucidates the
information of spending habits on six products of about European people who are from UK, France, Italy and Germany,
spending habits on six products.
British people spent the most amount
of money on the six consumer goods compared to the other countries in overall. The UK
residents’ expenditure was mostly on photographic film (more than 170 thousand
pounds), which is similar for French people (nearly 170 thousand pounds). This
figure is followed closely by toys (nearly 170 thousand pounds) for British
people whereas the expenditure on toys and CDs (of around 158 thousand pounds)
made by people from France. The least spending was on Tennis racquets for citizens
from both countries of about 155 thousand pounds and 145 thousand pounds for UK
and French, respectively. (Need better transition)
Italy and Germany spent below 160 thousand pounds sterling on all six categories. were used by residents from Italy and Germany. The highest spending for Italy
was 158 thousand pounds for Toys and for Germany was 150 thousand pounds for
Tennis racquet. The lowest spending was on personal stereos and photographic film
for Italian and German for 150 thousand and 145 thousand pounds, respectively.
It is evident from the graph that, the UK
people spent the most money on the six consumer goods whereas Germany spent the
least money. Most of European residents bought Toys and photographic films, and
they spent the least on tennis racquets. <(General한 내용이나 overview는 introduction 뒤에 써주시는게 더 좋습니다)
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