▶ Your Answer : The graphs above illustrate the comparison with total population and its age group with perspectives in the United Kingdom between 1960 and 2040.
It is noticeable that the total population in Britain has been increased since 1961 and is expected to go up grow continuously until 2040. On the other hand, most of age groups show the decreases except for one group,which is the group of people more than 65 years.
In the year of 1960, the population in England recorded almost 50,000,000 and kept stable until 1980. From 1990, British the total population count showed slightly going upward and is expected to reach a peak by reaching showing approximately 70,000,000 in 2040. This trend is the opposite compared with the its age group. Surprisingly, the age group, 0-14, has been diminished over a period of 50 years and this trend will be keep going continue in the United Kingdom (Uk라고하시면 very informal 해요). Nevertheless, the age group 65 and older more presents a slight rise in total. There was no move from 1960 to 1980, yet as of 1990, percentage has been going upward. For the first time in The age group 15-64 recorded the highest rating 50% by the year 1960 and showed the a rapid increase. After peacking??? more than 60% in 2010, this group will be seem to go down in the graph.
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