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As the society
develops, the concerns about the environment are rising. As a result of this,
many developed countries are using bicycles as a main form of transport which is
beneficial for health and for the environmental environment aspects. However, despite all
these benefits, there are some countries not familiar popular with using a bicycle as a
main form of transportation. There are various reasons for not using a bicycle as a
main form of transportation and there are diverse diversify ways of making a bicycle as
the main transport.
Despite Although the
bicycles are healthy for individuals and environments, its usage is not
popular in some countries. There are several reasons for this. A certain country may use a bicycle
as a casual exercise purpose but not ride a bicycle for the commute. Riding a
bicycle can be difficult physically if people they ride every day since, it requires a
great physical strength. health. Furthermore, the insufficient bicycle facilities such as
bicycle lanes and bicycle parking lots can prevent people from riding a bicycle. As
the society develops, the other methods of transportation have developed to
that which are more convenient, faster and easier to travel than that of bicycles.
Therefore, riding a bicycle may not be suitable with today’s busy lifestyles,
because riding a bicycle takes long time to commute.
Due to those
several reasons are preventing people to riding a bicycle. To solve this issue,
each level of parties can be dealt separately. At an individual level, individuals
should be aware of healthy lifestyles by conducting regular exercises.So that, so that they can commit to live healthier life by riding a bicycle, because riding a bicycle
is the most effective way of exercise. For the corporations, it is important to
provide bicycle lockers or parking lots to encourage more cycling riders. In
addition to this, the government must construct more bicycle lanes around the
areas so that it can encourage more daily riders to commute. The amendment of
legislation is required in order to provide the safety for the riders.
Therefore, all the parties can solve be solved this issue by dealing at each level.
In conclusion,
there are varieties of reasons for unpopularity of riding a bicycle as a main
form of transportation. Even though it could be such as insufficient bicycle facilities
or the introduction of other convenient public transportation. However, this riding bicycles can be encouraged by individuals, corporations and the governments. Each party can improve be
dealt this issue by performing separate solutions.
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