some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. discuss both these vies and give your own opinion.
Some believe that increasing the number of sports facilities can be the most powerful way of improving public health whereas others think that there will be other solutions for making public health better. I will state both these views in this essay and I personally agree with latter.
On top of that, people are more and more inclined to spend time at home and not to do exercise by themselves because they do not have opportunities to go to gym or other facilities for accessibility matter. By expanding the number of places to exercise such as gym or swimming pool and studios for public, people can easily access to the facilities whenever they want. Besides, it is clear that one of positive effect of participating some classes in the facilities is the increased availability of interacting with other people. It is not only good for their physical health but also mental health by socializing with each other.
Despite the fact that, others think there will be another way of increasing public health. For example, people in Korea, have gotten regular health checkups for free in every second year. According to the Korean government, this lead the decrease of various diseases such as cancer and heart disease. By joining the medical checkup, people possibly find out their disease or medical condition in an early step so that they can properly deal with it. They also provide free consult service for public mental health at some of subway stations and it is effective of increased mental health since some Koreans avoid to go to clinic because of their mental illness.
In conclusion, there are a variety ways of improving individual’s health such as increasing the number of fitness facilities, however, I believe that other options could be more effective for people to have improved medical conditions.
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