Poverty is a problem that the majority of children these days.
Discuss the effects of poverty on society and suggest some solution to this problem.
Many experts have been concerned about the poor environments that can occur to a lot of children. These days, this issue is increasing more than the past though economic growths are currently proceeding in most nations. So (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 좋지 못합니다.) many people around the world are trying to solve this matter.
Firstly, poverty causes children of
life-threatening issues to children. It is commonly known that many children in some
developing countries, especially Africa are struggling with malnutrition and
lack of water. For example, in Africa, a great number of children are still
starving and dying because they do not don’t have appropriate food transportation system
and the hospitals. As this shows, they are being isolated compared to those in than developed
countries children. Therefore, to help children who are suffering starving and
dying by illnesses, many organizations and nations need to find various
solutions.
To address these kinds of matters that many children
are struggling, now many developed countries around the world are trying to
construct food production plants in Africa. For instance, constructing plants
in Africa that produce a lot of foods which that contain essential nutrients would
aid children’s physical development. Moreover, many experts believe that it
could decrease the mortality rate of children who are dying due to the
malnutrition. For this reason, more developed countries need to participate in
this campaign to help African children.
To summarize, although a number of children
are affected by their poor environments, it is evident that many efforts are
being made done to fix this issues. If organization such as the World Health Organization
and developed countries work together, the poverty will soon be a problem of
the past.
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